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Once More, With Feeling
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I shed my first tear,
In what I fear
To be over a year,
Or so it would appear.
I sit self-doubting,
Ceaselessly pouting;
Inner voice shouting
For me to stop louting.
Hasn’t it gone so fast?
Thought it’d last.
A shame the dye of the past
Had to be caste.
Doesn’t feel all too real,
Will I be able to deal
With the void I feel?
Of course, time’s touch will heal.
My mind, I can sense, is reeling,
While my heart is peeling.
I wish to that thing past the ceiling
To have it all once more with feeling.
In what I fear
To be over a year,
Or so it would appear.
I sit self-doubting,
Ceaselessly pouting;
Inner voice shouting
For me to stop louting.
Hasn’t it gone so fast?
Thought it’d last.
A shame the dye of the past
Had to be caste.
Doesn’t feel all too real,
Will I be able to deal
With the void I feel?
Of course, time’s touch will heal.
My mind, I can sense, is reeling,
While my heart is peeling.
I wish to that thing past the ceiling
To have it all once more with feeling.
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Wrote this on the night before my last proper day at school.
Kinda sad to see the end of an era and realise you're still so naive and immature, yet filled with all this maturity. It's like a clash of wills inside us and the sadness just made me feel enlightened.
Then again, maybe I'm just screwy. Who knows?
PS - looks like dA doesn't like the way I layed this poem out. Eejits they are. Hmph.
Kinda sad to see the end of an era and realise you're still so naive and immature, yet filled with all this maturity. It's like a clash of wills inside us and the sadness just made me feel enlightened.
Then again, maybe I'm just screwy. Who knows?
PS - looks like dA doesn't like the way I layed this poem out. Eejits they are. Hmph.
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Very lovely.
And don't worry about the layout, I think it's kind of cool.
And don't worry about the layout, I think it's kind of cool.